Perspectively speaking this is much better, however i think you need to start defining your environment a lot more. The viewer needs to know immediately that this is a wood shop. The two critters in the middle of your painting are distracting because we don't know what they are. "We" do becuase you told us, but i don't think someone else will know that it is a puppet being put together. Also i think it would really help if you added a lot more wood shop elements that the viewer can recognize in visible areas (not only in the shadows or far back).
Also that's a nice tree they have in doors, why is it there?
cheers
mjaw, ik was heel erg bezig met elementen neerzetten dat ik geen tijd aan het achterliggende verhaal heb gestopt.
BeantwoordenVerwijderenMisschien kan ik het morgen na de seminar doen